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Post by peavey on Jan 12, 2006 15:24:45 GMT -5
:: Matt Mayhem is seen sitting in a gym.He's just finished working out and he is covered in sweat.He wipes the sweat off his face and he looks into the camera. ::
Mayhem: "I know i've only been in Valor for a short time.But in this short time i've tried to prove myself to you people,and ive tried to prove to myself that i am capable of being a top player.And at Sunday Night Slam i'm going to put up a high stake for my match.Now this doesnt effect T.J. Extreme in the least,he's just my Partner.But if our team loses,I Matt Mayhem,on my own.Will never show my face in Valor again."
:: Mayhem stands up and paces around for a minute. ::
Mayhem: "That's right i will quit Valor if i lose!I know this is a major risk,but i also know this is my only chance to show that i can handle my half of a tag team and also prove that i can take on one of the top stars of Valor.And if we do lose atleast i can say i lost to Immune.Sure some of you might not like him but lets all stop and admit it,He has talent."
:: Mayhem mutters something under his breath. ::
Mayhem: At Sunday Night Slam,your not going to see me doing my usual,this Sunday.I'm not going to hold back,and with a tag team partner i amgoing to Destroy Immune!Because i do not want to leave Valor.But this is to prove myself.See you Sunday.It's do or die."
:: Mayhem leaves the gym as the screen fades to black. ::
OOC: Again this is short but i think the point came across.
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Post by ZMaster on Jan 12, 2006 17:05:29 GMT -5
I don't reply to many rps but I don't like the idea of you saying you'll quit if you lose. Maybe it came across in a negative light but it's like if we don't give you the win, you'll just quit like that. I think really the best advice I could give is read other RPers RPs to help better yourself.
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