Post by creeper on Sept 7, 2005 4:42:25 GMT -5
**The following Promo contains scenes of graphic violence. Viewer discretion is advised**
((OOC: If this is too much let me know and ill tone it down))
(Scene opens as we enter what appears to be a nice looking small neighborhood. the streets are dark some light only by the small street lamps and some by just porch lights.... As we wander we approach a small white house. From the street we can see into the large front window... Sitting in the living room we see a young girl... some where around the age of about 18 or so... She is sitting on the couch talking to who we can only assume are her parents. Sitting also is a small boy about the age of 5... He is sitting on the floor watching TV. Suddenly the two adults get up and walk to the front door. The girl waves to them and they leave. Unseen by the adults we slowly approach the house. We make our way to the side of the house and we can now see the girl sitting on the couch eating popcorn and talking on the phone... The child is still sitting on the floor watching tv... We begin to move again... Now moving towards the rear of the house. As we get closer we can hear a dog barking. We continue to the back yard and we can now see the dog is chained to a clothes line. He is running back and forth barking at us. Scene change... We are now inside the house where the girl is still talking on the phone and the child has fallen asleep on the floor. The girl notices the child is sleeping and pauses in her conversation.)
Baby-sitter: Hey can you hold on a moment? I need to put Danny in bed.
(She sets the phone down and stands up. She picks up the child and carries him up stairs and into his room. Outside we see the light in the child's room come on As we see the girl walk in front of the window we step back into the shadow of the garage. The dog continues to bark as we watch the girl put the child in the bed. Looking down we see a box of rather rusty tools. We reach down and pick up a claw hammer. As soon as the light is turned out we now see the entire back yard as if we were looking down at it from the child's window. We see a huge figure walk quickly towards the barking dog. The figure raises the hammer and brings it down. There is a yelp then silence. We see the girl stop just before she gets to the bottom of the stairs. She heard the yelp. She pauses for a moment but then goes back to the couch... she picks up the phone a resumes talking. She also has picked up the remote and is now flipping channels. We are now outside where we see the dog lying in a puddle of blood. We pull the hammer out of the dog's skull and walk over to the garage. We use the hammer the break the lock off the door and enter the garage. Once inside we slowly walk around. We pick up various items only to drop them on the floor. We stop at a wall where various things are hung. We reach up and take a hatchet from the wall. We also remove a tire iron and then we leave the garage and make our way back to the house. We walk around the other side of the house and find the power box and the phone line. Suddenly inside the house the girl gets a strange look on her face.)
Baby-sitter: Hello?... Brenda?... Hello?
(She hits the hang up button a few times then drops the phone.... )
Baby-sitter: Crap!... This can not be happening....
(There is a noise at the back door... The girl remembers the dog barking then suddenly the yelp echoes in her head.)
Baby-sitter: No no no no ... NO! There is no way this is really happening... This isn't a movie.... I'm just freaking out....
(The girl walks slowly towards the kitchen. Once there she grabs a large knife then slowly backs away from the back door as the noise outside continues. The door knob is being moved as if someone is trying to get in. The girl is getting more and more scared.)
Baby-sitter: GO AWAY!
(She screams and the noise stops. THUNK THUNK THUNK! the sounds of something hitting the door. Small cracks appear in the door then the blade of an axe smashes through the back door. The girl screams... to frightened to move she just stands there and watches as the axe cuts through the door then... CRASH! This huge monster, who we all know as The Creeper, smashes through the door and stands there staring at the girl. She screams and then runs into the living room. The Creeper follows her... slowly stalking her as she tries to get away... She runs towards the front door and fumbles with the lock... As she tries to unlock the door The Creeper swings the axe and plants it deep in the door just missing the girls head. She screams and swings the knife sinking it into his side. The Creeper doesn't move. He pulls the knife out and stabs at the girl catching her in the arm. She falls to the floor screaming as The Creeper towers over her. She begins kicking to try to get away and she kicks the knife out of his hand. He grabs her by one leg and she starts kicking at his face. He lets her god and she scrambles up and makes a dash for the stairs. The Creeper watches as she goes up the stairs and then follows slowly. Once up the stairs she begins throwing things at The Creeper. Nothing seems to stop him. She runs into the master bedroom and locks the door. Once inside she begins to search for anything she can use to defend herself. She opens the closet and on the top shelf she finds a hand gun... but no bullets... She searches the closet but finds none. She goes over to the dresser and begins going through the drawers... She finds the bullets as The Creeper begins to beat on the door. She screams and runs into the closet. Once in there she sits in the corner and tries to load the gun with very shaky hands. The Creeper smashes through the door and makes his way over to the closet as he reaches the door BANG! he is shot. He stagers back. The door opens and she walks out holding the gun. BANG! she fires again. This time he falls. BANG BANG BANG BANG click click click click. She drops the gun and drops to her knees. She is hysterical. With her face in her hands she begins to sob. She stands up to leave when suddenly The little girl in white appears next to The Creeper.)
Girl: Do you see now that this is reality? That gun there and us here in your home... We are reality and we cant be stopped... Try as you might we will never be stopped... Bailey had to learn this truth himself... We did what no one else could... We showed him reality... We showed him that there is no immortality in the darkness... And now he knows that we can take him there at anytime and show him such unspeakable horrors... You too shall learn this lesson very soon.
(The Creeper sits up and stares at her. She screams and tries to run but he grabs her by the leg causing her to fall.)
Girl: Only after two matches in this federation we are now being given the opportunity to win something of value... We are given the chance to win the North American championship belt... Such a shinny shinny belt... What a pretty toy that will be for us to hold... Of course it will only cause more people to try to hurt us... But we will take care of them as they come... One by one they will all come for us and we will show them the horror that awaits... This Sunday we must face two other men at once... These two men are coming after our title... One of which is our new friend Jayson Ray... We already played with him once before... we punished him for being bad... But this time we will do more... We have such sights to show you Jayson... Such sights...
(The babysitter gets free and scrambles to her feet. The Creeper is now standing. She backs away as he walks towards her slowly. She backs up against a wall and screams. The scene cuts and we now see shadows on the wall. The Creeper shoves the tire iron through her throat impaling her to the wall. She gurgles and shakes for a moment then goes limp. Scene cuts back and we now see The Little Girl in White.)
Girl: This other person in our match is some one called Sane... Sanity is very over rated... And once we are finished with you I'm sure we will agree...
(The Little Girl looks into the camera with her cold dead eyes.)
Girl: If you want to look into our eyes to get a feel for us you may... Look into the eyes of the damned... Our cold dead eyes... Look deep and see what lies in wait for you beyond the shadows ,Sane... Look deep...
(The Little Girl looks up at The Creeper.)
Girl: Let us leave this place now... I am sleepy...
(The Creeper stares at The babysitter for a moment then turns around. He looks down and sees Danny standing there wide eyed and motionless. The Creeper reaches down the grabs the child's face. He then lets go and leaves. Danny turns and leave the room... He walks down the stairs... Through the living room.. and out the front door. He makes it to the porch when his parents walk up. His mother screams when she sees the blood on his face. They ask him what happened and all he can say is bogeyman over and over. Scene fades to black.)
**No actors were harmed in the making of this Promo**
((OOC: If this is too much let me know and ill tone it down))
(Scene opens as we enter what appears to be a nice looking small neighborhood. the streets are dark some light only by the small street lamps and some by just porch lights.... As we wander we approach a small white house. From the street we can see into the large front window... Sitting in the living room we see a young girl... some where around the age of about 18 or so... She is sitting on the couch talking to who we can only assume are her parents. Sitting also is a small boy about the age of 5... He is sitting on the floor watching TV. Suddenly the two adults get up and walk to the front door. The girl waves to them and they leave. Unseen by the adults we slowly approach the house. We make our way to the side of the house and we can now see the girl sitting on the couch eating popcorn and talking on the phone... The child is still sitting on the floor watching tv... We begin to move again... Now moving towards the rear of the house. As we get closer we can hear a dog barking. We continue to the back yard and we can now see the dog is chained to a clothes line. He is running back and forth barking at us. Scene change... We are now inside the house where the girl is still talking on the phone and the child has fallen asleep on the floor. The girl notices the child is sleeping and pauses in her conversation.)
Baby-sitter: Hey can you hold on a moment? I need to put Danny in bed.
(She sets the phone down and stands up. She picks up the child and carries him up stairs and into his room. Outside we see the light in the child's room come on As we see the girl walk in front of the window we step back into the shadow of the garage. The dog continues to bark as we watch the girl put the child in the bed. Looking down we see a box of rather rusty tools. We reach down and pick up a claw hammer. As soon as the light is turned out we now see the entire back yard as if we were looking down at it from the child's window. We see a huge figure walk quickly towards the barking dog. The figure raises the hammer and brings it down. There is a yelp then silence. We see the girl stop just before she gets to the bottom of the stairs. She heard the yelp. She pauses for a moment but then goes back to the couch... she picks up the phone a resumes talking. She also has picked up the remote and is now flipping channels. We are now outside where we see the dog lying in a puddle of blood. We pull the hammer out of the dog's skull and walk over to the garage. We use the hammer the break the lock off the door and enter the garage. Once inside we slowly walk around. We pick up various items only to drop them on the floor. We stop at a wall where various things are hung. We reach up and take a hatchet from the wall. We also remove a tire iron and then we leave the garage and make our way back to the house. We walk around the other side of the house and find the power box and the phone line. Suddenly inside the house the girl gets a strange look on her face.)
Baby-sitter: Hello?... Brenda?... Hello?
(She hits the hang up button a few times then drops the phone.... )
Baby-sitter: Crap!... This can not be happening....
(There is a noise at the back door... The girl remembers the dog barking then suddenly the yelp echoes in her head.)
Baby-sitter: No no no no ... NO! There is no way this is really happening... This isn't a movie.... I'm just freaking out....
(The girl walks slowly towards the kitchen. Once there she grabs a large knife then slowly backs away from the back door as the noise outside continues. The door knob is being moved as if someone is trying to get in. The girl is getting more and more scared.)
Baby-sitter: GO AWAY!
(She screams and the noise stops. THUNK THUNK THUNK! the sounds of something hitting the door. Small cracks appear in the door then the blade of an axe smashes through the back door. The girl screams... to frightened to move she just stands there and watches as the axe cuts through the door then... CRASH! This huge monster, who we all know as The Creeper, smashes through the door and stands there staring at the girl. She screams and then runs into the living room. The Creeper follows her... slowly stalking her as she tries to get away... She runs towards the front door and fumbles with the lock... As she tries to unlock the door The Creeper swings the axe and plants it deep in the door just missing the girls head. She screams and swings the knife sinking it into his side. The Creeper doesn't move. He pulls the knife out and stabs at the girl catching her in the arm. She falls to the floor screaming as The Creeper towers over her. She begins kicking to try to get away and she kicks the knife out of his hand. He grabs her by one leg and she starts kicking at his face. He lets her god and she scrambles up and makes a dash for the stairs. The Creeper watches as she goes up the stairs and then follows slowly. Once up the stairs she begins throwing things at The Creeper. Nothing seems to stop him. She runs into the master bedroom and locks the door. Once inside she begins to search for anything she can use to defend herself. She opens the closet and on the top shelf she finds a hand gun... but no bullets... She searches the closet but finds none. She goes over to the dresser and begins going through the drawers... She finds the bullets as The Creeper begins to beat on the door. She screams and runs into the closet. Once in there she sits in the corner and tries to load the gun with very shaky hands. The Creeper smashes through the door and makes his way over to the closet as he reaches the door BANG! he is shot. He stagers back. The door opens and she walks out holding the gun. BANG! she fires again. This time he falls. BANG BANG BANG BANG click click click click. She drops the gun and drops to her knees. She is hysterical. With her face in her hands she begins to sob. She stands up to leave when suddenly The little girl in white appears next to The Creeper.)
Girl: Do you see now that this is reality? That gun there and us here in your home... We are reality and we cant be stopped... Try as you might we will never be stopped... Bailey had to learn this truth himself... We did what no one else could... We showed him reality... We showed him that there is no immortality in the darkness... And now he knows that we can take him there at anytime and show him such unspeakable horrors... You too shall learn this lesson very soon.
(The Creeper sits up and stares at her. She screams and tries to run but he grabs her by the leg causing her to fall.)
Girl: Only after two matches in this federation we are now being given the opportunity to win something of value... We are given the chance to win the North American championship belt... Such a shinny shinny belt... What a pretty toy that will be for us to hold... Of course it will only cause more people to try to hurt us... But we will take care of them as they come... One by one they will all come for us and we will show them the horror that awaits... This Sunday we must face two other men at once... These two men are coming after our title... One of which is our new friend Jayson Ray... We already played with him once before... we punished him for being bad... But this time we will do more... We have such sights to show you Jayson... Such sights...
(The babysitter gets free and scrambles to her feet. The Creeper is now standing. She backs away as he walks towards her slowly. She backs up against a wall and screams. The scene cuts and we now see shadows on the wall. The Creeper shoves the tire iron through her throat impaling her to the wall. She gurgles and shakes for a moment then goes limp. Scene cuts back and we now see The Little Girl in White.)
Girl: This other person in our match is some one called Sane... Sanity is very over rated... And once we are finished with you I'm sure we will agree...
(The Little Girl looks into the camera with her cold dead eyes.)
Girl: If you want to look into our eyes to get a feel for us you may... Look into the eyes of the damned... Our cold dead eyes... Look deep and see what lies in wait for you beyond the shadows ,Sane... Look deep...
(The Little Girl looks up at The Creeper.)
Girl: Let us leave this place now... I am sleepy...
(The Creeper stares at The babysitter for a moment then turns around. He looks down and sees Danny standing there wide eyed and motionless. The Creeper reaches down the grabs the child's face. He then lets go and leaves. Danny turns and leave the room... He walks down the stairs... Through the living room.. and out the front door. He makes it to the porch when his parents walk up. His mother screams when she sees the blood on his face. They ask him what happened and all he can say is bogeyman over and over. Scene fades to black.)
**No actors were harmed in the making of this Promo**
Also, spend more time on your opponents. You spent more time describing the scenery and characters than you did on your opponents. If it was a horror flick, A+. As for a wrestling promo for an upcoming title shot, C. Keep up the good work though. I like the dark angle your character portrays, just keep finding your niche and you're going far. 
