Matt Mayhem's Debut Promo

[peavey]

:: The screen fades into the dimly lit room as Man in the Box by Alice in Chains plays.As the verse of the song begins a figure comes into the room.The figure steps infront of the camera as the music lowers into the background so you can hear the person better.The little light that is in the room gives you slight visibility of the person but you can see the person has black and green face paint on. ::

"My debut in Valor is so close so near i can feel it,i can taste it,and i can't wait much longer...The anticipation i feel right now is so high that when i get in that ring tonight i can't be held responsible for what happens to my opponent.Because when i get nervous,anxious, or excited i become uncontrolable.I cant stop my actions i just go head on 110% and i just demolish whoever my opponent is.But then again after it's all said and done,there are no regrets.

:: The figure grabs one of the candles that sits close to him and he holds it close to him to fully reveal himself. ::

"You see..my name is Matt Mayhem.I got the name Mayhem because whenever i step into the ring complete Chaos and Mayhem breaks out.And if your lucky enough to get out of the ring with a minor injury then you are truly lucky.Because most of the time when i live that ring,all thats left is a man broken in half and covered in his own blood."

:: Mayhem smiles for a few moments but the smile quickly turns to a look of pure anger. ::

"My opponent for my first match is a Veteran by the name of Juba.I'm not going to disrespect the man because he is a Veteran and he is one hell of a competitor.And for my first match here im honored to face him,But im also honored for him to be my first Victim.Because no mater how long he's been around i always find a way to beat my opponent.So Juba,Good luck!"

:: Mayhem blows out the candle as Man in the Box fades back in louder. ::

"See you soon.."

:: Mayhem's shadowy figure disappears. ::

[The eXtremist]

Really good for a debut RP man. I enjoyed it.

[peavey]

thank you,im glad to hear that you liked it.I was afraid it'd be 100 percent shit. lol

[loverboy]

okay first off the rp was good but wasnt great. the rp was solid except the second speech paragraph. That really didnt come together for me, but hey considering this as your first debut rp, I would definatly give you a thumbs up. good luck and I will be reading your future rps.

[havok360]

this rp was really good man, I think the length was a little short but like loverboy said, we are taking this in as a debut promo. So for this being a debut this was good. So welcome to Valor and good luck. Hope you plan on sticking around. Looking forward to see where you stand in your future here in Valor.

[Hardcastle]

Tad short, but nice debut. You dont really know your opponent or this fed, so I can understand the shortness. I appreciate the early rp effort. That strong willingness towards effort is duely noted. Good luck!