Career Killer

[ecw4life]

We're backstage at The Staples Center in Los Angeles,California.We see no one in sight down the far hall as Thunder will begin in four hours time.Pictures are shown on the nearest white wall,next to owner of the VWA Steven Lynch's office.The pictures show classic pictures of the Los Angeles Laker's winning the NBA championships that they won.More classics pictures of the famous number 99 Wayne Gretzky in a Kings uniform,breaking records and recreating history over and over again.We hear a sound in which it sounds like someone is in major pain.The moaning gradually gets louder as the sound echo's throughout the empty backstage area.We can see a black shadow on the white far wall.Looks like a guy crawling down the hall in tremendous pain.The shadow continues to move closer and closer.The shadow dies off.The focus is more clear.We can see now that the man crawling down the hall is Johnny Arsenic.Arsenic looks to be injured as more moaning can be heard.We see that Arsenic has a bloody bandage around his head from last Thursday.The blood trail is being left behind Arsenic as the blood soaks right through the bandage.Arsenic has a light blue hospital robe on which he got for staying over night in the hospital courtesy of Havok and Juba.Arsenic stops crawling and leans over to gain his balance on the wall.Arsenic puts one hand on the wall and his other hand on the ground,trying to get up.Arsenic struggles to get to his feet.Once he finally gains his balance on his feet, he continues to lean on the wall to his right.Then stumbles around trying to walk forward.Arsenic has made it, three-quarters of the way to where Steven Lynch's office is.There is a far-away glare in Arsenic's eyes.Arsenic looks to have sustained a concussion because of the events which happened after the Juba,Havok match on Thunder.Arsenic staggers around as he finally makes it to what looks like his destination place,Steven Lynch's office.Arsenic leans on the door with the last bit of energy he can outstand.Arsenic places his hand over top of the door handle and opens the door open.We follow in with Arsenic to see what is going on before Thunder takes place.Arsenic closes the door behind him then falls on Steven Lynch's black leather sofa.The room is filled with brightness to it as all the lights are on in Lynch's office.But, Steven Lynch cannot be seen.Arsenic sits up daggering around on the sofa.Looks like he does not even know where he is currently at.A flushing sound is heard.The sound of water dripping from the sink can be heard now.A door opens.It is non-other then the main man himself Steven Lynch,coming out of the bathroom.Lynch closes the bathroom door behind him and then turns around.Lynch is surprised at what he is seeing.Then begins to speak.

Steven Lynch:What can I do for you?

Arsenic looks up with a far away look in his eyes.Then stands up but stumbling a few times before gaining full balance of himself.

Arsenic:Sir.Last week.I know I tried to attack Juba and Havok after there match they had.And obviously it did not work in my favor as you can see.But look at me.I'am in no condition to wrestle here tonight.I sustained a concussion last week.

Arsenic reaches in his pocket.He pulls out a paper and hands it to Steven Lynch.Lynch accepts the note and looks it over.

Arsenic:Look.I have doctor's note.It clearly says that I'am in no shape of wrestling here tonight.So I'm sorry I cannot wrestle here tonight.

Steven Lynch does seem concerned.Lynch looks to be disappointed.Lynch looks straight at Johnny Arsenic with a concerned look on his face.Lynch then looks down to the papers.Lynch hands the doctor's note to Arsenic as Arsenic takes control of the note.Lynch walks to his office door.Lynch turns the doorknob and opens the door.But before stepping out of his office,he glances at Johnny Arsenic.Arsenic has a smile on his face.But Lynch still looks a little disappointed as he speaks:

Steven Lynch:Johnny Arsenic.Well there is nothing I can really do about it.It is an official doctor's note which makes you ineligible to compete tonight.But,I'am your boss.So get ready.Your match is scheduled first on tonights spectacular card.

Steven Lynch has spoken.And closes the door behind him has he exits his office.Arsenic's suddenly drops quickly as he is stunned at just what happened.Arsenic stairs towards the door hoping that Steven Lynch comes back and changes his mind.But that does not look to be happening.Arsenic stairs at the floor for a moment.Arsenic looks back up with his hands over his head.Arsenic loudly speaks:

SHIT!!!!!!

Johnny Arsenic is completely pissed off now as he takes his hands off of his head and rips off the bandage on his head.Arsenic looks at the bandage.We see that Arsenic was not really bleeding.He had a blood pack in the bandage.Arsenic throughs down his blood pack and his bandage to the ground in anger.Arsenic is pissed off at the fact he must wrestle Havok tonight.Arsenic turns his attention toward the right.Then points.

Havok, you can thank Steven Lynch for not giving me the night off tonight.Because you will fear me starting tonight.I will punish your ass here tonight because of what you did to me two weeks in a row.Two weeks ago you cost my match against Juba.You interfered causing me to lose my match by disqualification.I did not even get pinned and I did not even submit.I lost my match because of your ignorance.You could have waited until I was declared the winner of the match.But no,you had to interfere and cost me my match against Juba.Then last week I came to the ring and watched the match between you and Juba.Then what the hell happened?You both cheap shot me and you injure me by hitting your Arabian Face Buster on me through a damn table.I had to stay over night in the hospital forcing me to miss last week of action.I'am not even cleared to wrestle.This is outrageous.This is unfair.But it is going to all work out in the end.You see tonight, I shall make you suffer.You are just a little punk kid coming into a man's world.Havok you caused enough trouble around hear.And I mean enough is enough Havok.Because I will punish your ass,pumble your punk ass,make you bag for mercy.Because I,Johnny Arsenic will not hold back for people who want to mess with me and sacrifice their lives by taking such a big risk by attacking me.And Juba.Do not show your face in my match because if you try or pull any stunt.My foot will be up your ass in a heart beat.Understand kid?

Havok.This whole scene between you,Juba and me was not my fault.Because when I was preparing for my match against Juba.A dumbass like you was locked in you lockeroom.It was Juba who did it.Not me.But when you come into my business in which your not even apart of.Well then,you become my business.But as for now Havok,yes you are my business.But after tonights little competition.Havok,you will become Johnny Arsenic's bitch.

Johnny Arsenic puts his finger down.Arsenic then gently puts his hands in his hands across his hips,while looking to the ground.

Havok, if you think about bringing your slut down to that ring.It will not only be you in danger of your own filthy life, it will also be that bitch of yours,who works on the street for a living,no wonder why you brought her here.Understand one thing If she gets involved.Well she will be struck hard by the most courageous move in Valor today,called the Dishonorable Discharge.Bitch!! I will end any hope of your dreams.I will single you out by taking that chair that you hit me with and open it up place it around your filthy neck and crush your throat.The blood shall flow through your throat.Creating tremendous pain.Clogging your windpipe up.Nothing anyone can do to help you.Your career will be washed away as my foot hits that chair killing your dreams of becoming something in the VWA.

Johnny Arsenic walks towards Steven Lynch's office door.Arsenic opens the door up but before leaving he turns back with one more thing to say.

Havok.Come this Thursday.Your career will be shut down.Courtesy of The Dishonorable Discharge.Oh by the way tell your slut.I'm free after our match.

Arsenic reaches in his pocket.Arsenic brings out a $100 bill.Then places it on the leather sofa beside him.

There is a little tip for that slut for this Thursday.

Arsenic laughs.The door shuts as he exits Steven Lynch's office.An advertisement is shown."Only hours away from the clash between two hated opponents.Johnny Arsenic and Havok.But in the end who shall have there arm raised?Will it be Havok?Or will it be Arsenic?And will Juba or Havok's mystery women have anything to do with the result?Tune in to Thursday Night Thunder."
The scene fades to black.

[havok360]

I feel you couldve broken up the beginning description, you had a little too much and I feel that kindof hurt your rp. I also didnt like how you used Lynch, even though you hadpermission, it just seemed like you tried to steal the gimmick from carlito a few months back when he had to defend one of his titles with an arm injury. you are supposed to be a professional and a tough son of a gun. I also think you calling my Alora a slut, was kindof weird considering she just came, and havok and her arent dating and her character hasnt messed around with anyother guy. besides all that the rp was focused but just seemed like you couldve done better. I aint trying to be an ass, I also feel both rps had flaws and I feel this is going to be a close match to call. good luck to you and lets put on one hell of a show.

[Hardcastle]

havok360 said:

I feel you couldve broken up the beginning description, you had a little too much and I feel that kindof hurt your rp. I also didnt like how you used Lynch, even though I gave you permission, it just seemed like you tried to steal the gimmick from carlito a few months back when he had to defend one of his titles with an arm injury. you are supposed to be a professional and a tough son of a gun. I also think you calling my Alora a slut, was kindof weird considering she just came, and havok and her arent dating and her character hasnt messed around with anyother guy. besides all that the rp was focused but just seemed like you couldve done better. I aint trying to be an ass, I also feel both rps had flaws and I feel this is going to be a close match to call. good luck to you and lets put on one hell of a show.

Sorry to burst your bubble.....but I fucked Alora.



The thing that hurt this rp the most is the vulgarity. Slut and bitch were said about 2 dozen times. Someone get Arsenic a thesaurus. Also, watch the spelling man. Its obvious you didnt proof read this rp.

The things I liked were the injury excuse. Great idea. I really liked that and I think it worked great. You stayed completely focused on your match, while still acknowledging your feud. Nice job with that. I didnt like the setting. People doing rps from the arena 4 days before the event.......just my personal opinion, seems kind of dumb. What if you wanted rp again? You would have to be 2 hours before the show or something.

[Valor CEO]

hardcastle said:

havok360 said:

I feel you couldve broken up the beginning description, you had a little too much and I feel that kindof hurt your rp. I also didnt like how you used Lynch, even though you had permission, it just seemed like you tried to steal the gimmick from carlito a few months back when he had to defend one of his titles with an arm injury. you are supposed to be a professional and a tough son of a gun. I also think you calling my Alora a slut, was kindof weird considering she just came, and havok and her arent dating and her character hasnt messed around with anyother guy. besides all that the rp was focused but just seemed like you couldve done better. I aint trying to be an ass, I also feel both rps had flaws and I feel this is going to be a close match to call. good luck to you and lets put on one hell of a show.

Sorry to burst your bubble.....but I fucked Alora.



The thing that hurt this rp the most is the vulgarity. $lu+ and bitch were said about 2 dozen times. Someone get Arsenic a thesaurus. Also, watch the spelling man. Its obvious you didnt proof read this rp.

The things I liked were the injury excuse. Great idea. I really liked that and I think it worked great. You stayed completely focused on your match, while still acknowledging your feud. Nice job with that. I didnt like the setting. People doing rps from the arena 4 days before the event.......just my personal opinion, seems kind of dumb. What if you wanted rp again? You would have to be 2 hours before the show or something.

Oh that was heartless Hardcastle, A anti-deadman screwing havoks manager, that is just disturbing. lol jking.

Immune

[The eXtremist]

I think this is most obvious, your RP's are jumbled together with no spaces. If you improve your spaces, you can be dominant in no time.

[ecw4life]

thanks, i was in a rush. i had no time.im sorry if i let u down guys.i feel horrible about this rp

[The eXtremist]

^^ Don't be. I personally liked it, but its hard to read RP's like that if their just going to be filled with jumbled words and no spaces.

[ecw4life]

ya i know what you mean.i wanted to do better but ill do my best ASAP

[Anna Rocks \m/]

i loved the dr's excuse idea...very creative...and i didn't mind you calling me a floosey .oo(haha the board can't bleep that one out) but why is it that is what a guy immediately calls a girl lol? and hardcastle U weren't suppose to be telling everyone about that geeze...it's bad enough it makes me look like im into the whole necrophilia thing but exploiting it is unacceptable teehee

[ecw4life]

^^ i said that just beacuase im a heel.And basically I see it wherever i go someone on tv is calling someone a slut or whatever..i didnt mean personally or nothing..im just "working" the viewers over.It just states that Im the heel who doesnt care about noone if you know where im getting at.I was in a rush to do it and if i had more time on my hands id say something that doesnt relate to "slut" kind of terms.it be more like a dis but not so bad that it's "slut"iam sorry i will not do it again.ill use better remarks next time but again i was in a rush for this....

Arsenic